Brilliant stuff, and great use of the "booby" tag. If you're not already getting a lot of work, you should be.
This is a great use of minimalism in your drawing style. It's not terribly subtle, but it's playing to your strengths. Could definitely be better, but nothing jumps out as all out wrong.
I agree with jago, this could overcome a lot of weaknesses by simply being more detailed. I'd also probably do another ink pass in general, because the line work is terrible inconsistent and faded in some places.
Looking at some of your past work, I'd say black and white is definitely your strong suit. I understand the need to experiment, but you should always put your best material out into the wild.
Great idea, mediocre execution. Keep working at it, and I think you'll get past any and all current issues.
Yeah, I agree with both of you. I rarely use color...I gotta try though.
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